Approved - Jedi Order Cassus Valorous

Basic Information

Character name:
Cassus Valorous
-- Aliases: N/A
Homeworld: Alderaan, House Valorous
Species: Human
Age:
27
Gender: Male

Faction: Jedi Order
-- Rank/position/title: Jedi Knight

Personality and appearance

Appearance:
Cassus is a young male in his late 20's. He stands at 5' 9" and 151 lb. He has a slender frame with athletic tones. Cassus normally wears the classic Jedi robe, much to the Order's disappointment, he has made slight notifications to it to match his native clothing, but for more formal events he wears the non modified robe. He is often very cheerful and and quick to solve a situation.

Personality traits
[+] Pilot - As a child, Cassus had always dreamed of exploring the stars, even as a Jedi that dream never faltered. He trained in the arts of piloting with several Jedi Masters, excelling with all.
[+] Leadership - Bred for leadership, as a member of the Alderaan nobility, it was his duty to serve and someday lead. The importance of leadership to Alderaan was shown throughout his years on Alderaan, both in his studies, and in Alderaans structure.
[+] Martial Practices - From the age of 5, he was trained in combat, both hand to hand, and with weapons. His primary weapon being his lightsaber.
[+] Engineer/Technician - As a Jedi, the importance of engineering skills were made clear to him, as he strived to learn his way around starships and tools.
[-] Pride - He was full of pride with every achievement he accomplished, and often followed through to the end with his plans.
[-] Bravado - Even as a member of the nobility, he was bold, and now as a Jedi even in the face of battle, he does not back down.
[-] Thrill of Battle - From training on Alderaan in the military, to the fields of battle with the Jedi, Cassus has always felt a thrill when in battle.

Story so far...

In the core worlds, filled with nobility and peace, was Alderaan. Filled with their many nobles and citizens. Among millions of civilians, was Cassus. The greatest House of all, was House Organa, led by Bail Organa. Along with House Organa was House Thrane, led by Baron Celtar and the Crimson Lady. But that isn't where Cassus comes in. There was a third house, House Valorous. Lord Tirin of House Valorous was a mighty warrior, and advisor to House Organa. While Lady Loren, was a brilliant tactician, who was part of Alderaans defense force's high command. Cassus, son of the Lord and Lady, was thrust into nobility at a young age. He was taught how important leadership was, and was taught everything he needed to know, from combat to tactics. But his favorite thing to do was fly. He wanted to explore the stars and see the other worlds.

As a child, he loved the stories of the old wars, and Alderaans past. He was told that one day, he would take over the mantle of House Valorous, and would one day serve as an advisor to House Organa. Everyday he constantly thought about it, all of his responsibilities, his future, his life. He was so worried he would fail, and all that his House saw in him was failure. But he trained hard, learning many things such as combat, engineering, etiquette, politics, and piloting. Etiquette was most important in his family, and along with that was politics. An average boy his age would never have to worry about politics, for Cassus it was different. He was the future Lord Cassus Valorous. He had to be perfect, and that's exactly what he was. Little did he know his life would be changing very, very soon...

It was a hot summer afternoon, when Cassus was 13, that they came for him. He had just arrived home from his studies and was about to go work on The Valiant when he passes the living room and saw a robed figure, sitting across from his parents. Little did he know this figure was known other than a Jedi Master. His parents asked Cassus to sit down, than the robed figure spoke, and what he said would change Cassus's life forever. He was a Jedi.


The Force

Force Sensitive:
Yes
Lightsaber form: Form IV: Ataru (Practitioner)
Force Powers:
Core Powers

  • Control
    -- Tutaminis (Absorbtion of Energy) - Practitioner
    -- Curato Salva (Self-Healing) - Practitioner
    -- Altus Sopor (Masking ones presence with the Force) - Practitioner
  • Sense
    -- Prima Vitae (Detection of Life) - Practitioner
    -- Tactus Otium (Sensing the Force within others) - Practitioner
    -- Tai Vordrax (Using the Force to sense impressions, trace information from objects and areas) - Practitioner
    -- Telepathy (Reading minds, mentally communicating) - Practitioner
    -- Precognition (also known as "Sense Danger") - Practitioner
  • Alter
    -- Telekenisis (Ability to manipulate physical matter) - Practitioner
Universal Powers
  • Force Wave - Practitioner
Light Side Powers
  • Electric Judgment - Learner

Possessions

Possessions:

- Single bladed lightsaber (Dark green)
-Attachable commlink
-Datapad
-Portable holo map
-Modified DC15 carbine
-Thermal Detonator
Personal ship:
(Jedi Fighter) Eta-2 Actis-class interceptor
(Personal) Heavily Modified/Redone CT-900 Frieghter "The Valiant"
(Non modified picture)


Ever since Cassus found this crashed CT-900 freighter during an exploration trip on a barren moon, it has been his goal to restore it, and remodel it. He didn't have much time to spare, between studies, training, and Jedi matters. But he made time, and after 5 years, he had finally finished it. The Valiant served as Cassus's personal ship. It was heavily modified to, extending the hull and corridor in the center. It was also cleaned and recolored to fit a gold and white color scheme. The Order didn't approve of this project, and felt he should be dedicating more time to studies.


Statistics:
Crew -
minimum 1
Passengers - 8
Weapons - Two twin medium laser cannons, Proton torpedo launcher, Rotating Laser cannon mount, and tractor beam projector.



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Kylar Thrane

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Just a note - we keep them in the generic Databank area and only move them under their applied faction after approval. I moved your post for you.

Looking forward to Cassus' character write-up!
 

Kylar Thrane

Community Team
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Jedi Order
This is a great write-up so far and I like how you have blended in with other existing characters on the site.

Current recommendations prior to approval:
- Personality traits, with 4 positives listed I would like to see you add just a 3rd negative to help round out your character.
- In the background, I would like to just see a few more sentences on "how his life is changing very very soon" which I assume means being selected to join the Jedi Order. Not much needed, just want to close the loop on that character point.
- CT-900 Freighter, since your ship is a custom project, feel free to just list out a few stats of the ship.....mainly just list weapons (if it has some), needed crew to operate (can be as small as 1), and general passenger space

With that, I would say you are near ready for approval!
 
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